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Twinsburg Library Writers Group

Posted by p.bohnert@hotmail.com on April 23, 2010 at 12:42 PM Comments comments (0)

The Twinsburg Library Writers Group is a small band of dedicated people led by Cari, one of the Twinsburg librarians.


We gather once a month to review each other's work, hear a speaker, or improve our skills.  I recently submitted a piece for critique.  It is soooooo hard to wait for the answers to come back to me!


I know there will be grammerical changes to be made.  It seems no matter how hard I try to place all of the commas - I never get it quite right!  Then, there is that pesky POV!  Point of View is usually a very consistent entity in short stories and novels.  Pick one and stick with it - you say, "How hard could that be?"


Somehow, I get caught up in writing (then rereading and editing) and I still miss the occasional POV change.  Guess I just want all of the characters to have a say.


Isn't that what we all want in life?